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When In Rome <3
Models: Jillian Kronvall, and Me
Models: Jillian Kronvall, and Me
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© 2011 - 2024 MakaylaElaine1
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Technique
Impact
Hi there- Imma critique this now!
The vision- This reminds me of mirror, almost. It's like seeing two different reflections of the same model. One seems carefree and edgy while the other appears a bit more reserved- They remind me of the "shoulder angel/demons" in cartoons. Overall the vision of this is unique and I enjoy looking for the differences and similarities in the two models.
Originality while the execution of (what I see as the aforementioned cartoon phenomena) is unique, it is a trope of its own, so I can't say that this is a totally unique concept. However I do think that the piece is an original take on a well-worn idea, tough.
Technique Personally, the straight-on angle and lack of interesting perspective or shadow use in this picture falls a little flat. The picture itself looks skewed and I might suggest doing a shot with the models closer together on the pillar, with the camera either above or below, giving an interesting angle and perspective to the shot.
Impact Overall the message conveyed here is nicely achieved. Good job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap"/>